IELTS question: 学校的性教育课程是不是应该立即取消？
Sex education in schools are only introducing conflicting ideas and confusing among immature minds and should be immediately stopped. Give your opinion in not less than 250 words.
Answer?¿
Plan logically--3 aspects
thesis well focused on the importance of sex education.
structure well organized in 4 paragraphs.
content well supported by reasons and examples.
Then:
Write grammatically at rhetorical, syntactic and lexical levels--
language effectiveness
sentence variety
appropriate word choice
Brainstorming for ideas: 4 topic sentences
Topic sentence to start a paragraph--
1. Sex education matters now more than ever.
2. The logic to update sex education is obvious.
3. A number of questions arise.
4. Traditional family values should be emphasized to face a new reality facing sex-active teenagers.
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