Writing Topic: Ecosystem-the earth is in danger 主题
Structure 4 paragraphs 结构
内容分4段，起承转合
1. Human beings are threatening the planet
2. Wild-life species face mass distinction
3. Pollution causes global warming
4. Save the planet now
Essay 作者
by Mr. Jeenn Lee Hsieh
englishcomposition@hotmail.com
www.toefl-ieltswriting.blogspot.com
Sample Essay: 样稿
Should human beings be in for survival problems, probably they could have only themselves to blame. Until recently no one thought that human actions could affect the world on a global scale. Some scientists now believe that for the first time in recorded history such actions are occurring. Chief among them are threats to wildlife and man-made pollution.
The ecosystem with its wildlife is at risks. It is difficult to calculate how many species of plants and animals on earth have been wiped out and killed off since the Industrial Revolution. And how many others disappearing at an alarming rate may face extinction because of deforestation and hunting. It is as if anything humans touch is doomed. The biodiversity--living things and the relationships among them--demands attention. If little or nothing is done to avert the situation, humankind as species may also be doomed.
Humankind's collective impact also finds expression in mass pollution, accounting for mass extinction of wildlife in rivers, lakes, seas and oceans. Thanks mainly to industrialization, no small a part of our environment has been containminated. The effect is disastrous, endanging all species, including human beings. To make things worse, pollution of gases such as carbon dioxide from automobiles and factories produces ozone-depletion in a phenomenon known as greehouse effect. This phenomenon is said to be directly related to global warming. The result is climate change, creating severe floods and droughts on the planet. Experts warn that global warming is threatening the earth by raising sea levels and pushing temperatures higher.
Protecting the natural mechanisms and preventing pollution are two hard tasks for human beings to deal with. In certain fields, too little is done too late. However, the good news is that there is an increasing awareness of the dangers human beings are in. An urgent commitment is needed to save nature for nature's sake. Otherwise, the way to eventual doom may be sure, although slow. It is not unlike pulling bricks from a big wall. Human beings may keep doing it until the wall suddenly collapses.
1. Human beings are threatening the planet
2. Wild-life species face mass distinction
3. Pollution causes global warming
4. Save the planet now
Essay 作者
by Mr. Jeenn Lee Hsieh
englishcomposition@hotmail.com
www.toefl-ieltswriting.blogspot.com
Sample Essay: 样稿
Should human beings be in for survival problems, probably they could have only themselves to blame. Until recently no one thought that human actions could affect the world on a global scale. Some scientists now believe that for the first time in recorded history such actions are occurring. Chief among them are threats to wildlife and man-made pollution.
The ecosystem with its wildlife is at risks. It is difficult to calculate how many species of plants and animals on earth have been wiped out and killed off since the Industrial Revolution. And how many others disappearing at an alarming rate may face extinction because of deforestation and hunting. It is as if anything humans touch is doomed. The biodiversity--living things and the relationships among them--demands attention. If little or nothing is done to avert the situation, humankind as species may also be doomed.
Humankind's collective impact also finds expression in mass pollution, accounting for mass extinction of wildlife in rivers, lakes, seas and oceans. Thanks mainly to industrialization, no small a part of our environment has been containminated. The effect is disastrous, endanging all species, including human beings. To make things worse, pollution of gases such as carbon dioxide from automobiles and factories produces ozone-depletion in a phenomenon known as greehouse effect. This phenomenon is said to be directly related to global warming. The result is climate change, creating severe floods and droughts on the planet. Experts warn that global warming is threatening the earth by raising sea levels and pushing temperatures higher.
Protecting the natural mechanisms and preventing pollution are two hard tasks for human beings to deal with. In certain fields, too little is done too late. However, the good news is that there is an increasing awareness of the dangers human beings are in. An urgent commitment is needed to save nature for nature's sake. Otherwise, the way to eventual doom may be sure, although slow. It is not unlike pulling bricks from a big wall. Human beings may keep doing it until the wall suddenly collapses.
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